Our treatment was the first stage of getting audience feedback. We pitched our ideas of the music video to the rest of our media class. The treatment included our overall main ideas such as what song we chose, the locations we want to use and the themes we want to include in our music video. We got very positive feedback on the locations we want to use and what costumes and props we want to include in our music videos. The audience loved the idea of filming some of the video in Victoria Park. One issue that came was how we were going to make this video be directed at both male & female and different ethnic backgrounds. We then came up with the idea of using both female and male actors that are all from different ethnic backgrounds. Another point raised by one of our classmates was how are we going to add the 'motion sickness' effect to our video. My partner then researched a way to get a very similar effect on the Premier Pro program we were using which helped us a lot. Our original idea was to use the college theatre for the stage scene in our music video, however, after consulting with out teacher, we decided that it would be better to use the studio in college instead as it would be a lot easier to get access to it for a longer period of time. Overall, the first feedback we got was very positive and it was also very helpful and made us realise what changes we need to make when we make our music video.